Monday, 23 January 2017

Hundred Word Challenge


  One morning I sat down to read.  “What is that?” I asked Dave.
“How would I know?”
“I will go and check come with me.”
“Fine, I will come,” said Dave.  Nervously I followed the sound. 
“Okay, I will walk faster.”  The sound was coming from under the sofa.  I carefully checked it was my bird.
“I hope she is fine,” said Dave with tearful eyes.
“She is fine,” I told him.
I placed the bird in her steel, mauve cage.
“Feed her these carrots,”said Dave.
“Birds do not eat carrots,” I said with laughter.



                                  

2 comments:

  1. Good story, but when you said, "Nervously I moved to where the sound was coming from," I think it would make more sense if you wrote, " Nervously I followed the sound," But it's your choice.

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