THE CROCODILE
"Look at that!" screamed a lady
driving across the Mesopotamia zoo. There was a huge crocodile escaping from the zoo. Everyone was
running for the lives trying to get away from the crocodile. The crocodile was destroying all the building looking
very and frustrated. Eating all the food brought by people in fear the crocodile
kept moving and was close to countryside houses and there was a parade. Moving
closer and closer to the parade. The crocodile reached the parade. The crocodile opens this mouth wide and eat it kids but a man wearing an orange coat grabbed the
kid and ran off. The crocodile
collapsed within the parade.
Good story but when you said," look at that!" you forgot to capitalize the L in look.
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