Wednesday, 30 November 2016

Hundred Word Challenge


                                      THE CROCODILE



   
  

  "Look at that!" screamed a lady driving across the Mesopotamia zoo. There was a huge crocodile escaping from the zoo. Everyone was running for the lives trying to get away from the crocodile. The crocodile was destroying all the building looking very and frustrated. Eating all the food brought by people in fear the crocodile kept moving and was close to countryside houses and there was a parade. Moving closer and closer to the parade. The crocodile reached the parade. The crocodile opens this mouth wide and eat it kids but a man wearing an orange coat grabbed the kid and ran off. The crocodile collapsed within the parade.

1 comment:

  1. Good story but when you said," look at that!" you forgot to capitalize the L in look.

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