Dear humans of Earth,
I want to tell you about why is family important to me. For me having a family is a wonderful experience. Having a family is like, you have someone always there for you, to listen to you and hear you cry. One of to protect you, care for you, encourage and support you. I can’t even imagine a day without them. When I think of not having a family, being an orphan. No one there for you to share your feelings and protect you. Thinking about this I feel sad for the people who are orphans. Think about them.
Good story, but you said i feel said for the people. Your supposed to put sad not said.
ReplyDeleteamazing story, but you wrote for the people you are orphans. You have to change the you to who
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