It was a
beautiful day.
“Wake up Ava the sun is out," called Mother Madeline. Ava is
an orphan. Her parents had died in a car accident. Since then she lived in an
orphan home with 21 other children. Ava came downstairs worried that she was late. Ava picked up a
piece of brown bread.
Today it is a picture
day. When she came downstairs there was a camera man. All of them posed and the camera man took
a picture.
When you said "Wake up Ava the sun is out called Mother Madeline." It should be like this "Wake up Ava the sun is out," called Mother Madeline.
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