“Stay in one room!” yelled Michel`s mom. "You know there are chances of an earthquake.”
“There`s lightening out there does not necessary mean that a storm is going to occur” said
Michel.
Ava Michel`s mother was an overprotected mother. Michel
always thought it was because he did not have a father. There was someone close
to the wall. It looked like someone was walking out of the wall.
“Who are you” asked Michel.
“It is your dad” cried Ava.
“He smiled at us and walked through the wall he came from.
Mother and I burst out of tears.”
You should take out the do not in the second sentence.
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